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1 september, 2021 it is so great to hear that you will begin your study at our university as th...
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it is so great to hear that you will begin your study at our university as the newly-enrolled international students. i am li ming, the librarian at our school. this notice is for the purpose of providing you with the basic information of our school library.不错，首段简明简明，表达清楚。 firstly, the library opens from 8:00 a.m. to 23:00 p.m.every day except for national statutory holidays. secondly, there are many classic books in the library. if you need, you can use your student card or log in log in to 登录到... 这儿log in 改为 log in to the student system to borrow. it is essential to note that no more than five books can be borrowed at one time and they should be returned within a month. in addition,还可以用furthermore remember to take your student card, since without it, you are not allowed to enter and read here. if you have other problems, you can consult the library staff. hope you will enjoy reading and studying in our library.
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1、固定用法：log in登入，log in是动词短语，后假定有接宾语需要先接上介上to,log in to+名词（网站、账号等） 如log in to your account, log in to facebook2、尾段参阅表达：if you have further questions or concerns, please feel free to email your questions to library@ssu.edu.cn. hope the information mentioned above will be of great use to you.词汇堆集：feel free to do sth. / be of great use to sb.feel free to do sth. 替换简略的you can consult ...be of great use to sb. 可以用来替换be useful for sb.3、这次小作文结束的不错噢！对一些常见的表达作一些替换可以让文章表达的丰厚性有所前进。
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welcome to our school to your school life.this notice is for the purpose of providing some informations information 是不可以数名词噢，informations改为information或许pieces of information of about更适合一点，关于图书馆的信息 library to you.to start with，our library with more than 3000 seats can satisfy your learning.secondly，to solve the need of preparing exam固定分配预备某事prepare for，介词缺失，we extend the opening time to the mid- night 表时刻,midnight前不需要定冠词and the library open open的主语是the library 奇数名词，open要用第三人称奇数opens at 7 a.m. last but not least，our library have has和前面相同的疑问，主谓共同more than 500000 books ，including math ，history and all kind of books. it can rich your school life in the high measure.hope you have a good time and please for free to write letter a letter to the e-mail 377849@email.com if you have problem相同的疑问，奇数可数名词前常常需要冠词a 或许the ，the标明特指，假定不是特指就用a 表泛指。这儿批改为have a prolem或许have problems.li ming
名词词性（不可以数名词没有复数方法，词尾不接s 或es；不可以数名词前不能加an/a；不可以数名词作主语，谓语动词用奇数；不可以数名词假定要标明数量，需要运用单位词，如a piece of paper, a cup of tea）主谓共同（主语是奇数名词，谓语就要用奇数第三人称）冠词的用法（冠词a/an/the 奇数可数名词前一般需要冠词，简略的说the 表特指，a 表泛指）3、首段参阅表达：on behalf of all librarians, i would like to extend the deepest welcome to new international students. i take great pleasure in offering some basic information with regard to our library to you（左）爱传达英语小辅佐杨杨（aichuanbo2022）
（右）爱传达英语小辅佐小小（aichuanbo2023）
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